Dear Students in my 8h30 (Wednesday) Langue Vivante class,
Here are some corrections from the papers you gave me at the end of class today. The first sentence will be what was written, and the second sentence will offer a correction or simply a better way of expressing yourself in English.
The notion of exclusivity have good and bad sides./// The notion of exclusivity has positive and negative aspects.
I think, as an example.../// For example, I think...
We have to put some limits in the exclusivity..../// We have to put some limits on exclusivity...
According to me.../// In my opinion...
It is up to the user to accept or not another user...///It is up to the user to accept another user or not...
people needs limits, rules.///people need limits and/or rules
youngers///young people
there is some exclusivities...///there are some examples of exclusivity
make feel people excluded...///make people feel excluded
TO BE CONTINUED...
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